Ever heard about "show and don't tell"? Start by describing the setting, the mother takes her first born son home and lays him in a handcrafted wooden crib in a light blue painted room.The room is filled with all the baby toys you can think of. And facing the baby's crib is a large glass shelving case with 12 sports cars lined next to each other in two shelves... Surely you can tell the parents are a wealthy bunch? Your word limit is very limiting though! Good luck!
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